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六星鑽石會員
2009-4-22 18:16#21
原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 11:59 AM 發表
i had change all my words into the simple english
i think u can understand it,can't u?
my english is not gd and simple
but i think a child born in 1994 can understand it...
rm 6ah1jl3rr9ab1hi9 ...
face_l_18: 錯到7彩 -
六星鑽石會員
2009-4-22 18:16#22
原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表
bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.
don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...
睇黎你都唔係好識..搵得咁小錯:smilie_O_o: -
四星黃金會員
2009-4-22 18:18#23
原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表
face_l_18: 錯到7彩
睇溜左個the...
simple我5覺有錯/.\ -
四星黃金會員
2009-4-22 18:19#24
原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表
睇黎你都唔係好識..搵得咁小錯:smilie_O_o:
請賜救:redface: -
七星元老會員
2009-4-22 18:32#25
原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 04:41 PM 發表
bored is followed by "with",your sentence should be changed into:
I feel bored with playing kicks.
don't use too many "that",otherwise your marks will be deducted.Most of them can be removed.
" ...
gd0.0,i learn a lot from u=]
improving my english for CE is great:D2
i never say that my eng is gd=[ so u can find so many mistake is very normal
[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:41 PM 編輯 ] -
七星元老會員
2009-4-22 18:34#26
原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:16 PM 發表
face_l_18: 錯到7彩
wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"<--- what's wrong-__-i don't understand:face_l_04:
[ 本帖最後由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:43 PM 編輯 ] -
四星黃金會員
2009-4-22 18:38#27
原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:32 PM 發表
gd0.0,i learn a lot from u=]
improve my english for CE is great:D2
i didn't say that my eng is gd=[ so u can find so many mistake is very normal
improving...the first word should be gerund in this situation.
the same mistake...use don't or never
after many,the word should add s -
七星元老會員
2009-4-22 18:40#28
原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:38 PM 發表
improving...the first word should be gerund in this situation.
the same mistake...use don't or never
after many,the word should add s
ch jor by myself:smile_13.gif:
(everytime i need to correct so many times to correct my sentences,sad-.-) -
四星黃金會員
2009-4-22 18:41#29
原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:34 PM 發表
wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"
cross out to,or simply add want before to -
七星元老會員
2009-4-22 18:42#30
原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:41 PM 發表
cross out to,or simply add want before to
i type wrong for that sentence-.-
just just---->just want-_- -
四星黃金會員
2009-4-22 18:43#31
原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:40 PM 發表
ch jor by myself:smile_13.gif:
(everytime i need to correct so many times to correct my sentences,sad-.-)
no change,no improvement:cheers: -
七星元老會員
2009-4-22 18:44#32
原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:43 PM 發表
no change,no improvement:cheers:
i agree:cheers: :cheers:
i am improving now:smile_13.gif: -
六星鑽石會員
2009-4-22 18:59#33
原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 06:18 PM 發表
睇溜左個the...
simple我5覺有錯/.\
你前面用左not 跟住又and simple 姐係話自己用得complex..
你應該加返個is 係simple 前面 -
六星鑽石會員
2009-4-22 19:00#34
原帖由 J.辛尼迪 於 2009-4-22 06:34 PM 發表
wrong is not a problem if i can correct it,i just just to improve my english,lol
"simple"
疊詞:smile_13.gif: -
四星黃金會員
2009-4-22 19:24#35
原帖由 §~對唔起~§ 於 2009-4-22 06:59 PM 發表
你前面用左not 跟住又and simple 姐係話自己用得complex..
你應該加返個is 係simple 前面
佢果句既意思係not simple,5係is simple
如果係is simple,你岩=0= -
六星鑽石會員
2009-4-22 19:37#36
原帖由 ~聰明~ 於 2009-4-22 07:24 PM 發表
佢果句既意思係not simple,5係is simple
如果係is simple,你岩=0=
佢話凸登比寫簡單d比人睇wor-- -
五星白金會員
2009-4-22 20:25#37
人地名校,你同人玩英文?:em014:
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二轉會員
2009-4-22 20:29#38
li day say mud ar...chat together la
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四星黃金會員
2009-4-22 22:06#39
原帖由 no9halu 於 2009-4-22 08:25 PM 發表
人地名校,你同人玩英文?:em014:
我讀中文中學ga...名乜春校,英文得果2等,岩岩好夠升中6 ja= = -
二星初級會員
2009-4-22 23:43#40
CE後再返來玩啦,好嗎?